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Always wanting more Than you were prepared to give Leads us now our separate ways With altered lives to live My heart will always beat for you With what little is left intact Love for us has come and gone So there will be no turning back If ever you have a lonesome day With nothing else left to do Think back on our love filled days When my love was all for you
Dan Kearley:10-23-11 A very special thanks to Elizabeth Wesley For sharing her mind with mine In another beautiful collaboration :-)

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Date: 12/8/2012 9:38:00 PM
Oh this is such a lovely poem and another wonderful collaboration. beautiful and sad all together.....Shaz
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Date: 11/15/2011 9:13:00 AM
Nice to see Dan, the comments are always so special.
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Date: 11/8/2011 7:17:00 AM
I can feel the sadness here, great work! It really reached out.
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Date: 10/26/2011 9:06:00 AM
Love your last two lines... awesomely written. I like your style in writing... simple, deep, meaningful :)
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Date: 10/25/2011 3:49:00 PM
YOU ARE BEGINNING TO AMAZE ME---I TOLD YOU----HAVE A POINT AND WRITE PRECISELY WHART YOU WOULD SAY FREE VERSE OR RHYME....THIS IS SO GREAT...IT PHYSICALLY HURTS ME TO SMILE BUT INTERNALLY YOU GAVE ME A MILE WIDE SMILE...THANKS FOR THAT...THEY'RE A RARE COMMODITY IN MY LIFE write on bro your phriend ~free cee!~ Phreepoetree
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Date: 10/23/2011 1:44:00 PM
Dan, I truly understand where you're coming from. at time 1 wants more than what I can handle ..nice poem... P.d
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Dan Kearley
Date: 10/23/2011 2:04:00 PM
Thank you :-) I have to add something at the bottom.
Date: 10/23/2011 1:21:00 PM
It is sad when relationships don't work out and you wrote about it so beautifully.. I especially love the last two lines :) tc Wilma
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Dan Kearley
Date: 10/23/2011 1:25:00 PM
Thank you :-)

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