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i sent my love to her address but it came back unopened i sent my heart and soul to her but they went unused and broken i sent her all my sympathies to heal her wounded heart and i sent every holiday with my presents and my art but alas my love was no more before i even knew she took the place where i sent love and left me so so blue but i can give her something that she can't refuse something that i'll give her no one else can use i can give her tears fallen from my eyes i can give her longing from a long and lonely life i can give her mourning in my own unique way and i can give her memory that will never go away

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Date: 8/14/2023 3:18:00 AM
A sincere, heartfelt, poignant work Howard Kerr
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Date: 8/14/2023 2:18:00 PM
I'm glad you saw it. I read it to myself.
Date: 11/5/2015 7:04:00 AM
Very nicely done, Situation, very nicely done indeed! Best regards! :) john
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:24:00 PM
I really like this one!! it has originalityl!!
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:17:00 PM
As I read the last line the only thing that came to mind was- "OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" it was like an unintentional Burn. I love it.
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Date: 1/27/2014 2:16:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poem TS. I really enjoyed yours - feels like you experienced these emotions recently... JF
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Date: 1/27/2014 9:46:00 AM
A melancholy and solemn write, 'the situation'. Ah,this sounds like the pinnacle of all sadness and misery.:( Appears to be so very very real and not at all make believe. Oh well, best wishes; Keep well! Mikki
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Date: 1/25/2014 8:02:00 PM
Very romantic but sad touchy write, congrats on the win,
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Date: 1/25/2014 4:03:00 PM
now this is romantic, but I'm surprised you didn't write about a certain person...yes, I like it, as I like most of your romantic pieces; there were only nine winners so you did very well (not that you'll think so! haha) congrats my dear :)
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The Situation
Date: 8/14/2023 2:24:00 PM
I think a girl named April.
Date: 1/21/2014 4:18:00 PM
T S..... This is really something. hope you are not being taken for granted. <3 Love always ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/21/2014 8:20:00 PM
no this is for a contest. it's a poem about loss the theme of the contest. charolotte puttifoots contest.
Date: 1/20/2014 9:36:00 AM
Typo line one. Now about the poem, outstanding piece filled with angst.
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Date: 1/19/2014 6:13:00 AM
Oh....this is sad and touching....Hope she burns with memories of you and what she could have had...Lovely write.
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