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'sensual Bliss'

while fingers explore our lips discover new depths sensual pleasure 250620112115 Contest: Sensuous Senryu 4th Place

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John Loving Iii

Date: 6/29/2011 5:34:00 PM

i feel like i know you already. john

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 2:43:00 AM

I knew this one HAD to be a winner, Wilma. So happy for you, dear. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/27/2011 9:02:00 PM

Love this one..congrats on your win. BG

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 1:53:00 PM

congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 1:25:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your spectacular win with this super sensuous senryu ..oh wow.. perfection luv.. enjoy my friend...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

George Aul

Date: 6/27/2011 11:56:00 AM

Congrats, while I wipe the sweat from my brow.........George

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 11:50:00 AM

My congratulations on this ween in the contest of francine, Wilma

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your fourth place win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/27/2011 10:02:00 AM

congrats on your 4th place win with this steamy senryu Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2011 5:17:00 AM

wilma, the subtle passion here is beautiful. erotica!.. my winning bet! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 4:58:00 AM

oh ..exciting lines so sultry and inviting Wilma.. good luck in the contest my friend.. let the fingers do the walking and pure delight luv..oh.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/26/2011 2:39:00 PM

Yes. Finger exploration is the most fun of all. Enjoyed. LOve, daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/26/2011 12:29:00 PM

Hot, passionate poetry, Wilma. Francine will love this sensual entry. Wish I could respond more, but it's not possible now. Thanks for your prayers. Love you, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/26/2011 12:16:00 PM

Email ur way Hun.....

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/26/2011 11:13:00 AM

hahaha! I am laughing because I just read Jack's comments below, lol :) funny Jack! oops I think I will comment below later-- sorry. As for you, Missy Steamy! I am so glad that your muse woke up in time! Haha I just knew that a contest like this would be right up your alley ;) both of us had those fingers and lips traveling ;) ooh lala senryu indeed ;) mwahugs :D

Jack Horne

Date: 6/26/2011 10:39:00 AM

Love this piece, Wilma. It's the first I've seen for this contest - I'm not sure how far we're allowed to go in this one. I was going to write about bulging pants etc and it would turn out the guy had a fat butt, but I see no humour is allowed. LOL, the first three letters of the Captcha thingy is EWW - it must have read about the guy's butt

Wilma Neels
Date: 6/26/2011 12:10:00 PM

lol somehow these Captcha thingies pick up on our vibes Jack lol okay that is just me being crazy ;) thanks for the laughs and Missy I would not expect anything different from you then to jump on anything hilarious ;D

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 6/26/2011 11:14:00 AM

sorry Wilma, I am butting in here :D haha pun intended of course! and you are such a hoot, Jack :D btw told you these captcha thingies have brains! heehee at the "EWW" :D

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/26/2011 6:47:00 AM

Well as the saying goes " let the fingers do the walking...".... Its was 80 here but now 100 after that write!!! with love Michael

James Peranteau

Date: 6/25/2011 10:36:00 PM

Ohhh, I'm a definate fan dear poet ! Awesome Senryu ! Have a bright weekend Wilma...much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2011 4:34:00 PM

oooh la la, Wilma!! there are some steamy writes on here today!!

Johnny Sumler

Date: 6/25/2011 3:52:00 PM

Wow! Pass me some of that sensual bliss'. Goodluck with this passionate write!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/25/2011 2:06:00 PM

Wow, homegirl!!! You know the saying "so 'n bek (pardon) moet heuning kry". This is great stuff. Good luck in Francine's contest. I'm rooting for you. Hugs, Licia. xxx

James Fraser

Date: 6/25/2011 12:42:00 PM

I love it my Sassy Lady, like the Senryu by Chris, it's made my mind go into overtime with it's thoughts. So few words can create so much. Good luck in Francine's contest. I may post another later, so keep a look out. Smiles for you my Sassy one :)