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She pervades and unveils all that I have kept hidden for so long I do not know her but I hear her voice in and around my mind It is weightless and I know she wills it in sound with ease She is harmony, a beauty I would be so favoured to find The friendly nudge at my side when I need it most I do not know her but I feel her on my skin magically without touch She engenders love innocently in all she does It is a glow around her that is infectious and unrivalled by much Her soul is saved for me and her gaze meets mine softly as does the sun at dusk I do not know her but I see her eyes piercing mine Without force nor resistance there is a wild and untainted kinship forged She is a reflection that light overrides darkness, a sign Her essence is the burst of aromas that fill the air around me I do not know her but I taste the very air she breathes so tangibly It is crisp and light without a hint or trace of impurity A fresh tonic to heal, to restore and to strengthen vigorously As if I wonder and follow her, unaware yet willingly I do not know her but I smell her presence in rooms she has visited A remnant I could not mistake for any other if I tried There is something to be said for peace so beautiful and unlimited Have you ever tasted the air in such a way as to be swept away by it? I dare to say I have and yet quietly here I sit How strange are these things that unequivocally bind me to her? I dare not think on it, for rationality will not explain what is and what will occur In spite of total darkness between our paths and the questions I have I sense I will know her because once paths cross, we will reach out half and half

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Date: 10/18/2016 10:06:00 AM
Hi Bongisa.This is well written and has a nice flow....I also like writing poetry. I am not that perfect but feel free to read my poems and comment. Hugs. Mpho.
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Date: 10/11/2016 3:43:00 PM
I love the tone of expression and use of words in your piece, Bongisa. Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:48:00 PM
Bongisa, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Ember Bond
Date: 10/7/2016 11:52:00 PM
Skat, thank you for the warm welcome. I'm glad you enjoy my poetry as I'm quite a novice in writing and posting. I would be lucky to have you as a friend I'm sure.
Date: 10/7/2016 8:22:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 10/6/2016 9:07:00 AM
Bongisa, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ember Bond
Date: 10/6/2016 11:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda. I really appreciate your commentary and hope to receive more. I will definitely check out your poetry.

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