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Sense of Sereanity The curtains hold the sunlight at bay Covers wrapped up around my insanity A lull, a tranquility, envelopes The paper bearing witness to my demons Verse upon verse of amours and confessions There in with the darkness of this cloaked room A sense of serenity As the knife stabs at my insanity Very black is I Gwydion and Hafgan Dance in the meadows of my mind Naked is the lost one Whose mind falls into the sea Serenity and Insanity embrace In naked harmony As strength ebbs and blood flows Fading from this Celtic world Alone and insane The last call of reality, over the horizon Oh Tegwen Note: This poem was inspired by Tim Smith's poem "Sense of Serenity" and the following discussion we had in the Poetrysoup chat room! Was great fun all who participated!

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Date: 9/4/2016 8:14:00 PM
What kind of antics are you and Tim up to very deep write. Hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/5/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Eve, oh we just having fun with poems and word play, and tossing around ideas, but I have to tell you, there are times I think, if Eve could hear us she sure would have a big smile!!!!! Hugs!
Date: 9/4/2016 12:16:00 PM
Oh, that crazy chat room I never got into yet. I bet you had a great discussion. This kind of poem is too deep for me, Arthur, but it seems very well written. That is a curious spelling of the word in the title. maybe it is something besides serenity? you and Tim are just having too much fun these days!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/5/2016 7:01:00 PM
Hi Andrea, after Tim's poem on Serenity, I made up that word combining Serenity and Insanity !! and yes We have a few laughs in the chat, and its great sharing idea's but more important is also great knowing other poets.
Date: 9/3/2016 6:21:00 PM
What a "crazy" poem! I liked it! P.S. I didn't know you could chat on poetrysoup. How do you do that?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/5/2016 6:59:00 PM
Late answering as we already chatted on chat! Was great to see you there!
Date: 9/3/2016 12:42:00 AM
I wish I'd been in chat Arthur I missed out on this gem of a conversation... was it about 'Seren'ity lol:-) hugs Jan x
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2016 7:25:00 PM
More like Insanity!!!! :)
Date: 9/2/2016 10:46:00 PM
lol after the conversation, you wrote an excellent poem.......Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2016 7:24:00 PM
Thanks to my Insanity! :)
Date: 9/2/2016 9:56:00 PM
I love your take. Perfecto Arturo.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2016 7:24:00 PM
Thanks Tim!

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