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Sense

though night has fallen i lay awake staring at the ceiling trying to figure out what is what the dreams that come they make no sense switching from one to another never stopping on a single thought non-coherent imaes flash past of random things that don't seem to last will i ever make sense of them or will i give up to let it win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/10/2010 12:42:00 PM
why do i see this so much in my own thought at this time in my life thank you duncan
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Date: 2/3/2010 10:26:00 AM
Don't give up!
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