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Sensational Kiss

strong touch of passion... sweet fragrance fills my nostrils as mouths interlocked my body shivers as it flows down with strong vibes... sensational kiss Olusegun Arowolo ;Contest:"Romantic Senryu" Date:1-26-12

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/29/2012 4:17:00 PM

Hi there Olusegun..I thot and thot and thot about what to write for this contest..nothing jumped out of my head and so I decided to just really get into reading all the entries for fun..Yours has a great flow and it comes full circle nicely with the ending line as the title. Great form and love how the juxtaposed lines are arranged differently in each senryu. Best of luck in this contest. Hope your special one will get this verse in her Valentine's card..hint hint. Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 1/26/2012 11:29:00 AM

Very passionate one.Best wishes.