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Sensation of Pain

my body trembles my hands shake it gets harder and harder to breath with each breath that i take sweat dripping down my body tears rolling down my eyes i scream and scream but get no reply its finally over my body is limb "how do you feel baby?" "can we do it again?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/5/2009 8:37:00 AM
Welcome to PS, Monica! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:24:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Monica. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2009 6:00:00 AM
Pain is not exactly the message I get from this very descriptive well written poem. Nice job.
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