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Sensation Contending

Cool tongue teasing Lips undone.. pleasing Sweetness drenching Probing tongue quenching Heightened breathing Blinded with lacing Around me you’re pacing Cascading inside yearning Wanton fire burning Inhibitions quickly fading Transactional mating Animalistic surging Exploring another… Merging... Contending...bending... Blending!

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John Rhinem

Date: 4/17/2009 2:42:00 PM

Smile~Yes, just another one of "Your Amazingly Well Written & Expressed Writes Dear Gifted Jane Bowen!!!":):)~Actually, all of "Your" writes today~have fit the picture of the "True Abilities of Greatness Which 'You' Hold!!!":):)~It has been a pleasure viewing "Your Gift" again!!!~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~"Have A Beautiful Day Jane Bowen!!!":):) Bye ~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2009 6:49:00 PM

Great passion, Jane! So erotic and enticing, you have me yearning for love right now. "Exploring another" is always such an intimate experience. And thank you for your comments - just an ordinary gal here. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2009 3:09:00 PM

Wow the passion speaks loudly here!! Great form and done with style!! ~ love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/13/2009 12:13:00 PM

Whoa. Passion at its finest. Love the presentation and how the excellent content builds up and up! ~lol~ Awesome! Love, Shar

Luke Steadman

Date: 4/13/2009 12:05:00 PM

my bad on the wildflower philosophy! it was "through" thank you kindly for the comments and correction on it...your poetry is also amazing and in this peice my favcorite part is "Blinded with lacing Around me you’re pacing" well said...~Luke

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/13/2009 11:19:00 AM

Jane, this is just so smooth physical emotion! great work!!! Jim...and I loved your comment on 'farm...' I've reached a dipper into a fresh-milk vat on a farm myself! mmmmm!!!! I agree!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/13/2009 11:13:00 AM

Oooh! ...quite the passionate piece, tastefully so, with superb language and imagery. BRAVO my dear! Best wishes, Keith (PS I altered 'Sorrow a little bit, for the better, I think. Take a look at it now!)