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Senryu Soliloquy

Must it be spelled out? Everything in black and white Where is mystery? “Spiritual things Are spiritually discerned” Carnal? Enigmas…. If you then misjudge Place the blame without a clue Golden Rule applies Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard D Seal

Date: 8/20/2013 3:50:00 PM

It's a mystery to me, left me without a clue but I suppose thats the point lol. Take care, Richard

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/19/2013 6:43:00 AM

I think I might try this form one day Eileen.Your work demonstrates your depth of talent.Have a great day friend.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:25:00 PM

WOW! This is very sweet coming from you, Mustapha! I thank you! I'm sure you would go great!!! You are so talented...but please stick to romance! You shine in that!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/19/2013 2:18:00 AM

Hi Eileen, Very well done! I must say you’ve managed to intertwine the theme into the form superbly. It's like you are having a private conversation and we the readers have the pleasure to tune in to it - very nice.I sure hope to read more of your work. Vicky.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:26:00 PM

Is it all that? Why thank you, Vicky! I'm glad it reads that way!!! I usually write just what pops into my head. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Hugs!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/18/2013 9:44:00 AM

Personally I like a bit of mystery.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 2:02:00 PM

:) Good to know

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/18/2013 7:51:00 AM

Many thought provoking lines here. You captured the "soliloquy" essence so very well.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 2:01:00 PM

:) I'm glad....Wasn't sure what title to use and then that just came up! Glad you felt that the content does live up to the title! Thanks, Drake!