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Senryu Romance

I awake embraced your warm breath tickles my ear I pretend to sleep soft hand on my cheek eyes that hold me in their spell ... my happy heart aches

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/6/2012 3:27:00 PM

I love it too; filled with soft romance and happy emotions!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/26/2012 7:55:00 PM

now, how can anyone top this, francine...your heart blossoms with sweet love!... getting heady to enter your new contest; gotta wake my muse..thanks too for appreciating my piece for your last " tourey"...:) huggs!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2012 10:12:00 AM

A nice pair of romantic senryu. This is more good work from you Francine.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 7:47:00 PM

Gosh, your model senryu are off the charts, Francine. WE all need to measure up to THESE!! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/25/2012 12:00:00 PM

These are the kinds of moments I dream of, Francine. Having someone to love in your life is so special. Very romantic! Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/25/2012 10:52:00 AM

Ah, a romantic write! I do so love these kind of poetry! You did very well with your poem I loved it Francine!! Awesome Work!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/25/2012 6:18:00 AM

Francine, you have a passionate poem here....I felt the tickle too! well done!!

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/25/2012 4:31:00 AM

aweeee....remembered romantic moments just like this...beautiful !!

Kash Poet

Date: 1/25/2012 1:04:00 AM

Very romantic Senryu and a good example of your contest Francine.Enjoyed the read.

Don Johnson

Date: 1/25/2012 12:00:00 AM

very sweet the lines of interface, when love takes all of you... sidestep from the human race, thoughts of one are really true...