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Senryu Not a Contest Senryu

Such deep sobbing In my dream Lost chances

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2010 8:42:00 PM

Saying so much with so few words!

David Smalling

Date: 11/17/2010 5:32:00 PM

I feel the weight of this sadness ... because the poem does excellently its work. Well done

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/21/2010 4:37:00 AM

so much sadness and regret in these lines, Linda-- I think you did wonderfully in conveying it-- nikko :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2010 8:57:00 AM

Hello there Linda !! What a wonderful and fascinating enjoyment to read this wonderful poem. (( many sad thoughts go thru my mind while reading this awesome and clever write. Enjoy and take care,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/15/2010 5:44:00 PM

enjoyed reading today! even though sounds like a bad dream I was having last saturday!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 1:39:00 PM

Nice piece but sad Linda...an emotional write ... cannot change the past so look toward a positive bright future luv.. enjoyed..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/15/2010 10:09:00 AM

It was pleasure to read your poetry today Linda. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 8:14:00 AM

There are many of us who regret lost opportunities, Linda. I'm sure a lot of people will relate to this one. Hope you're not really feeling down now, dear. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2010 10:08:00 PM

I really like this, Linda! luv, Andrea