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Senryu for mummy

Wrinkled hands shiver, touch me
 we’re back to playing the old game,
I’ll be mummy and you, me.

This poem is for Francine's Mothers day contest.

Copyright © Afroze Ali

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  1. Date: 3/4/2015 6:26:00 PM
    this one is heartbreaking. Sounds like my stepdad when he got alzheimers. Or it can be just an elderly person who now needs her child's care. I really like it!

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 1:46:00 PM
    a cute write, enjoyed this one Afroze , take care,...p.d.

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 2:10:00 PM
    it's very emotional and lovely write. but I suggest please pay attention to the syllable count in Senryu. First line 5, second line 7 and third line 5 syllables. Afroze

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 4:58:00 AM
    This is one of the best I have read..felt the warmth while reading this one my friend ...............7+++