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Senryu For Mummy

Wrinkled hands shiver, touch me we’re back to playing the old game, I’ll be mummy and you, me. This poem is for Francine's Mothers day contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/4/2015 6:26:00 PM
this one is heartbreaking. Sounds like my stepdad when he got alzheimers. Or it can be just an elderly person who now needs her child's care. I really like it!
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Date: 5/3/2011 1:46:00 PM
a cute write, enjoyed this one Afroze , take care,...p.d.
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Date: 5/2/2011 2:10:00 PM
it's very emotional and lovely write. but I suggest please pay attention to the syllable count in Senryu. First line 5, second line 7 and third line 5 syllables. Afroze
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Date: 5/1/2011 4:58:00 AM
This is one of the best I have read..felt the warmth while reading this one my friend ...............7+++
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