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Senryu: Feelings

If my heart smile precious gems appear in the cheeks ~~~~~~~~~ dart pierced my heart butterflies swarming invades my system ~~~~~~~~~ shattered in pieces my heart like broken glass 2015-08-27

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2015 5:58:00 PM

cute KU! My favorite was the first one. It was quite original. and the middle one great imagery in that middle line.

Charmane Bellen
Date: 9/15/2015 8:17:00 PM

right now those gems are on my cheeks! thank you all for appreciating my words..~hugs~charmane

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2015 12:11:00 PM

such an emotional trio of senryu:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmane Bellen
Date: 8/28/2015 12:45:00 PM

yeah it's a relief writing what you feel :D..thanks Jan for the visit!

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/28/2015 9:37:00 AM

Your creative thoughts encompass the soul of a poet and bring to life the experience for others to savor and enjoy. Emile.

Charmane Bellen
Date: 8/28/2015 12:28:00 PM

thank you Emile for such beautiful words..glad you enjoy it :D