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() green praying mantis kneeling at the witness tree- tonight's prey files in..... ___

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Date: 9/18/2016 8:10:00 AM
Great visual! Congrats, Rick!
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Date: 9/17/2016 1:02:00 PM
Excellent Rick! Congratulations on your win! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:41:00 PM
There is a distant darkness in this write Rick, a hauntingly un-nerving evil lurking amid the prayers.
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:22:00 PM
Praying...kneeling...witness... and then the 'prey' image! Powerful! Congrats on your win, Rick. Sandra
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Date: 8/20/2016 10:42:00 PM
a sharp twist on the theme Rick.
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