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Senryu

Senryu As sun pales The old town looks haggard Till dawn Senryu Streetlamps sadly knows They only play stand-in roles The sun is the star. Senryu When sun takes a break Crossly hides behind a cloud The day is murky

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Kathryn Collins

Date: 3/1/2013 1:38:00 PM

Don't even bring up judges (yes I know you didn't). I am soured on them.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 3/1/2013 9:22:00 AM

I love those words streelamps "they only play stand-in roles". Save them and use them again some place. I'll be waiting. love, Kathy

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/1/2013 10:42:00 AM

thank you Katy, i once danced under a streetlight it was my limelight and I was arrested