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Senryu 3

scent of a candle labeled “island moonlight” ~ somehow...it is 03 Feb 2022

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Date: 2/22/2022 2:26:00 PM
Truth can be a surprise, even in a Senryu. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, David. I'm new but will be following your poetry. Bill
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Date: 2/22/2022 2:14:00 PM
Sounds like an sensory perception that brings back a beautiful memory, nicely done.
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Date: 2/3/2022 10:05:00 PM
Love the attitude in this one, David. Can hear your voice in the words. Not easy to achieve in a senryu, but you've shown us the way. Kudos, Gershon
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