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Senryu 10 - Memorial

memorial day -- soldiers stand at attention a bugle plays Taps 5/27/13 For Black-eyed Susan's 1 Senryu any subject contest.

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Skat A
Date: 5/25/2015 10:22:00 PM
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thanks for the topic, Kim, love the poem. Hope you had a wonderful Memorial Day filled with warmth, pride, and togetherness. love **SKAT**"
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/16/2013 9:16:00 AM
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A PERFECT 575 SENRYU, smoooothly delivered, and so appropriate for Memorial Day! God Bless, Keith
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/11/2013 8:17:00 PM
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Great one, Kim...such a deserving topic...thanks for your visits to my work.....
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 6/8/2013 6:43:00 PM
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Thrilling topic for a poem! I was at a bootcamp a while ago and had my first experience with standing at attention. There is something about a lot of people doing the same thing and shouting "Yes sir!" in unison. I see you have captured some of that here.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/5/2013 2:30:00 PM
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To create soldiers attention bugle plays taps. Very nice poem on memorial Day. Loved always, bl
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Jack Horne
Date: 6/1/2013 4:13:00 PM
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very moving write, my friend
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Joseph May
Date: 5/30/2013 9:39:00 PM
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great senryu Kim....thanks for stopping by
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/28/2013 4:12:00 PM
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Great one that expresses the full extent of the a soldier's life..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/28/2013 3:11:00 PM
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Never so well expressed Kim. An excellent Senryu. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/27/2013 11:26:00 PM
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Simple and well said. A good Senryu. Enjoyed. Tfs
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