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in gran alacant if only our lips could meet... hot the rain in spain. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Date: 1/15/2013 9:16:00 PM
This is very lovely, Harry...romantic and fun! Is gran alacant a city in Spain? The last line "hot the rain in Spain" ties it together well! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2013 12:38:00 PM
I am happy you liked my urban poem, What is "in gran alacant" - I don't understand the phrase. My mother grew up in a small town - my father always loved Brooklyn and I now live on the Lower East Side - which is urban as you can get. I do try to get to the countryside when I can. My last trip was to Vermont. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/12/2013 10:02:00 PM
oh my it's another OOH LALA one from you!!! Have you been there, to Spain? It's luscious!!
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Date: 1/12/2013 6:39:00 AM
kind of celebration of life, for legends who accomplished their mission. In other sense the poem reflect some kind of tradition in africa. You know a kind of ritual. Maybe beyond your knowledge.
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Date: 1/12/2013 6:02:00 AM
Romance in the warm rain ......... love it Harry!!!!! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/12/2013 5:14:00 AM
Sizzling for sure..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2013 10:22:00 PM
Hi Harry,,, thank you for you... oooo..yes...love it...if only... one could meet....xox~ .pd
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Date: 1/11/2013 1:06:00 PM
Harry excellent, knew Mandy would like this one...David
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Date: 1/11/2013 10:29:00 AM
Wow , nice xx
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