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Senryu- In My Red Dream

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a red butterfly stirred me from my crimson sheets- kissed my scarlet lips _____________________ March 2, 2016 Poetry/Senryu/in my red dream Copyright Protected, ID 16-763-501-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, United Colours: Red sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:09:00 PM
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Broken, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 8:59:00 AM
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Linda, thanks for the congrats and the luv ~
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2016 8:52:00 AM
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I adore this. A sweet write that you have used red references turn in to a passionate poem. Love the duality. Amazing how so few words can stir ones emotions.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2016 9:38:00 PM
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James, so happy you like my red poem, it did turn out kinda sultry, thanks for the amazing !
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/9/2016 8:02:00 AM
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You are one and the only one...so unique..!!!! Amazing senryu !
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2016 9:52:00 PM
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Red, thanks for visiting with the unique and amazing, two words I love ~
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:18:00 AM
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Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2016 3:52:00 PM
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Funom, thanks so much for visiting with the wonderfuls !!!
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/4/2016 2:00:00 PM
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Hi Broken, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. A beautiful Senryu, of peace and serenity. A dream within a dream. A seven and winging its butterfly wings into my faves....Vlad.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 2:06:00 PM
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Vlad, thanks so much for the lovely comment, the seven and the fav ~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2016 10:51:00 PM
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Loved the romantic imagery in this great haiku, BW! Congrats on your win :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 12:47:00 AM
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Laura, thank you for the great comment and the congrats!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/3/2016 8:18:00 PM
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oooh la la. One of the very best I have seen yet on the list. Congrats, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:00:00 AM
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Andrea, thanks for that great compliment and the congrats !!
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/3/2016 7:27:00 PM
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Love this poem, congratulations in the contest "Red" win, Constance. Hugs dear friend
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:02:00 AM
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Eve, thanks for the love, the congratulations and the hugs !!!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/3/2016 7:04:00 PM
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Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:21:00 AM
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Nayda, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/3/2016 6:05:00 PM
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congrats broken wings on your win
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:25:00 AM
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Stephen thanks for the congrats !
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/3/2016 5:09:00 PM
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BW, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:40:00 AM
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Laura, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and smiles !!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2016 12:50:00 PM
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Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2016 4:57:00 PM
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Sara, thanks for visiting and the compliment ~
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 3/3/2016 5:45:00 AM
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What a lovely dream, I love the visuals you choose for your work. They always add zest to your poetry,,:), jill
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2016 11:05:00 AM
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Jill, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the compliment !!
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Robert Heemstra
Date: 3/2/2016 8:18:00 PM
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Beautiful!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2016 8:39:00 PM
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Robert, thank you so much for visiting with the beautiful !
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/2/2016 6:57:00 PM
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love this simple yet engaging and beautiful write Broken Wings. Thanks
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2016 7:38:00 PM
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Lewis, thanks for visiting my red poem with beautiful !
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/2/2016 6:34:00 PM
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Absolutely....visually and expressively surreal! This captures my artistic senses! Nice...Broken Wing! Write On!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2016 7:46:00 PM
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Walter, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment !

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