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Sending Waves

My feelings flounder like a sky of dying stars already snuffed out yet still sending waves of light to haunt my heart at midnight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/27/2019 7:16:00 AM
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Very well written!
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 7/24/2013 2:26:00 PM
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Wonderful ! Laura :)
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 7/18/2013 5:00:00 PM
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Don't suck up the whole ocean! You might pop!!! I made a really dumb choice on a poem to leave this on. Now everyone is going to wonder what is going on! Sending waves, Isaiah
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/16/2013 8:13:00 PM
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A beautiful tanks transmittimg a sad and emotive feeling dear
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 7/1/2013 9:50:00 AM
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I see you have captured this singular phenomenon with the usual combination of skill and emotion. I have read through this poem several times, and each time I get sadder!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2013 6:53:00 PM
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just had to tell you here. My hubbie's birthday is Canada Day then!!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 6/28/2013 7:29:00 AM
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A tanka seems to be just roomy enough to truly express emotion and feeling. You've done it here. I love the death/continuing life duo... Jack
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2013 12:40:00 AM
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wow, Just keep them coming, Heather. This is my kind of tanka!!
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John Loving Iii
Date: 6/27/2013 4:05:00 PM
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a midnight visit from a dream such a delight such should seem.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 6/27/2013 2:10:00 PM
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GOOSEBUMPS! Phew. Such passion, one wave crash at a time...
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Poet Tacito
Date: 6/28/2013 2:19:00 PM
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Oui Oui! :)
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Heather Ober
Date: 6/28/2013 9:23:00 AM
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Merci, mon ami! I aim for goosebumps haha :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/27/2013 8:35:00 AM
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Wow wow wow, I just love this haunting metophor. Something so far away that strikes a chord close too home. Well done Heather. Hugs Rick
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Heather Ober
Date: 6/28/2013 9:21:00 AM
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Thank you, Rick :)

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