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Blue-checkered curtains are faded, and drawn,.. after years since she made them, from gunny-sack cloth The Singer, long idle, now gathers more dust, with its needle still threaded, and the treadle at rest As I clear out the room, I think of long hours of foot-peddled power, and strength in her soul. She would unroll the fabric of roses and flowers, with determined resilience in her dark circled eyes. But prudence, endurance, would salvage a way Abandoned and left in a sea of lost dreams She picked up the pieces, of patterns and hems Making a living, and raising her kin, didn't come easy, but she had to win A life left unraveled, she must sew up again. Working past midnight. Spindles would spin. Somehow rekindled to live once again. Making ends meet. Selvedge edges and hems Sowing her heart, sowing her skill, and sowing her soul Sewn together again ______________________________________________________ 4/20/18

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Date: 5/20/2018 11:38:00 AM
Powerful memory picture. I'm not young and can actually remember similar scenes of passing cycles. Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/3/2018 1:59:00 PM
Carrie, I love how you weaved the special lines into your very poem filled with imagery from memories. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/2/2018 6:00:00 PM
I knew this would be high on the winners list, Carrie. Number one in my book. Many congrats . Lainie
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:44:00 PM
You did this one in your own perfect way. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie, a wonderful poem with great imagery ...
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Date: 5/2/2018 11:48:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in the contest Carrie, your imagery is so superb:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:59:00 AM
Oh yes. This is truly remarkable. Losing her love... Congratulations on your win. It is easy to see how this is a winner.
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:30:00 AM
Love the selvedge edges and making ends meet! I’m familiar as a sometimes quilter! Carrie, this is a lovely write! Congrats!
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Date: 5/2/2018 5:54:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Carrie.
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Date: 4/26/2018 8:36:00 AM
A Masterpiece, dear Carrie. So much the life story of my Grandmother George. This goes to my favorites. Elaine
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Date: 4/21/2018 5:19:00 PM
wow, now we are really talking, breathing excellent poetry, this about love lost... how nice to see you penning again, carrie... a best-seller!... huggs
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Date: 4/21/2018 11:45:00 AM
Superbly done my friend...a bit of a challenge...but you pulled it off...best of luck and stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 4/20/2018 9:49:00 PM
This poem is absolutely beautiful, Carrie. Every line is just so poetic, especially; 'Losing her love in a battle at sea, left her adrift in a sea of lost dreams' - pure poetic bliss for me. Your poem keeps me lingering over the beauty of its imagery and heartfelt emotion in your lovely lines. Best wishes for a win!
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Date: 4/20/2018 9:15:00 PM
Wow, Carrie. What a sweet and touching story you have unraveled. This character has totally come to life for me. I feel like the friend who has come along to support the daughter who has to clear out the room. A FAVE with me.
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