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Self Hate

i tell myself i love me and then i break my heart i ask for forgiveness and it restarts i tell myself i love me and i treat myself well until i make one mistake then i treat me like hell

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Ts Poetry

Date: 10/25/2019 6:18:00 PM

Life's full of disappointment, don't let it get you down. Your dreams are sitting on the horizon

Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 10/27/2019 11:25:00 AM

TS Poetry, thank you! Your comment is lovely <3 I hope you have a wonderful life, and I hope you'll continue to read my poetry in the future!

Wayland Bunch

Date: 10/21/2019 2:53:00 AM

Maybe you're being a little hard on yourself. Or possibly it's just a self observation. I do like the self observation of it.

Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 10/21/2019 7:40:00 PM

Yes, I am hard on myself, but it is also my recognition of me being overly critical. Thank you, Wayland :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/14/2019 10:12:00 PM

\we can relate, Brooklyn. Well penned poem.

Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 10/15/2019 5:21:00 PM

Thank you!!