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Self-Veneration

Mind marooned in complexity Intricacy singular in each living The psyche shapes unique entity On alien attribute it won’t cling. In reserved recess riddles hide Sub-conscious search can’t find Probing plea of the world outside Can’t contrive the closed mind. A pining prisoner of own making A cocoon in introvert isolation I see all the faceless faces fading Me wedged in web of self-adoration. My morphed mind turns Nemesis Makes a mirror of mirage for me I look into it lurching to the oasis It is only me that I always see. In self-veneration, a false perception I notice Narcissus in me lonely lurk A secret switching over to obsession Lies latent, languishing in the dark. ____________ February 10, 2023 For Brian Strand Upto You Contest

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Date: 2/11/2023 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/12/2023 3:56:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. Hope you are doing well.
Date: 2/11/2023 9:10:00 AM
Marvelous write on becoming aware. Congratulations on your win Subimal! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/12/2023 3:56:00 AM
Thank you, Linda for your appreciation.
Date: 2/10/2023 11:22:00 AM
Self respect and self awareness, can possibly add up to self veneration Subimal, I love the abstract way you went about this one, your 4th Stanza is quite brilliant, is mirage and oasis a reflection of the self, Introversion at its best, and a Fave, cheers David
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/11/2023 2:18:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit, and for "faving" the poem, David. You captured my introversion so very aptly. Self-respect is welcome, but when ego creeps in self-obsession inflates.

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