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Self-Existent Light

There are two kinds of light - the glow that illuminates, and the glare that obscures. James Thurber I hid my light, feared my own glare I'd just sit quietly to dream As rejection, I could not bear When lack internal self esteem Though sometimes lit by a moonbeam The nighttime when my heart I bare My sense of self I could redeem I hid my light, feared my own glare So I offer up a prayer To bring me to life through regime Send a message if you are there I'd just sit quietly to dream Wash away my worries downstream And be of my light more aware Reveal a light much more extreme As rejection, I could not bear Cast aside feelings of despair Release from me the silent scream Give me luminous light to share When lack internal self esteem My light and I can be a team Learning to love thyself and care Move forward as if in slipstream Discover something that is rare I hid my light Self-Existent Light Poetry Contest 28th May 2023 Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 6/4/2023 10:12:00 AM
'There are two kinds of light - the glow that illuminates, and the glare that obscures' - this quote nicely guides you thru your emotions. Love it.
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Date: 6/4/2023 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Jay, I appreciate your kind words
Date: 5/28/2023 4:58:00 PM
Keep that light burning DD....you have managed to cradle some of it into the words of this poem, kept it alive to glow in the reader. Good one....take care
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Date: 5/28/2023 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Paul, it was a bit of a marathon with this type poem. I had taken myself off to church the other day (well, twice in one week with a funeral too) - all these things play into what I write about. Thank you for your kind words

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