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All i ever knew was pain, Tears that falls from my eyes like the rain, The storm thats in my heart is violent, the air that i breath is like the wind knocking me of my feet back to the bottom of the ditch where it all began. Pain, heartache and hurt the scars on my brown skin are memories of my past, Memories that sends me in a trance it feels as if im really there, but im not goosebumps sends me chills heartbeat doesnt stop ding dong ding dong theres the bell, now im back to reality my mind wants to go back but my heart wouldnt let me ,the little girl inside me is still screaming for help but i try to put it past me this is the life of a loser, the life of a girl, the life of a woman whose still hurting like hell......

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Date: 10/8/2016 4:49:00 PM
Sakiyna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sakiyna Jones
Date: 10/8/2016 5:25:00 PM
Awe thank you darling and i will
Date: 10/8/2016 7:11:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Sakiyna Jones
Date: 10/8/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much :-)
Date: 10/7/2016 11:38:00 PM
Sakiyna, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Sakiyna Jones
Date: 10/8/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much ;-)

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