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Selective Memory

If I could remember Half of what I've forgot That sure would be something I have forgot a lot The older that I get The better my life seemed I can't tell the difference From real and what I've dreamed Short Poem Contest

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Date: 6/12/2013 12:19:00 AM
Congratulation Richard. Nice musings here. SuZ
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2013 6:02:00 AM
Thanks Suz-D
Date: 6/8/2013 11:53:00 PM
you are such a clever one. BIG congrats.
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:47:00 PM
I remember reading this before. I knew it had to place. Congratulations Richard on your fabulous win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2013 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Connie
Date: 6/8/2013 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Richard, nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2013 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 6/8/2013 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well deserved
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2013 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Monterey
Date: 6/7/2013 8:29:00 PM
thank you
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2013 1:27:00 PM
Hi Nathan sorry I didn't get to finish my response, I was just getting onto a plane so I had to shut of my computer. I appreciate you choosing my poem. The ? Was I went to comment on your work and all the poems were gone. I had hoped to read your work. Take Care Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2013 8:59:00 AM
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Date: 6/2/2013 4:29:00 AM
I also often to lost a simple memory, or perhaps I wish I could?:p what a day to read your short precious piece today :D, hug, Yanny
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/9/2013 1:18:00 PM
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Yanny, nice to see you back
Date: 6/1/2013 5:18:00 AM
Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2013 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Terry
Date: 6/1/2013 12:19:00 AM
I wonder if that's a good thing or bad thing... not being able to tell the difference. This poem is very thought provoking... aren't dreams, in a sense, real to YOU if not in the physical form. Because dreams are apart of you whether they become reality. Luck on the competition!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2013 7:29:00 AM
Kind of like the movie Matrix.
Date: 5/31/2013 10:02:00 PM
aint that the truth.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/31/2013 10:04:00 PM
Hi Colleen, so nice to have your visit.
Date: 5/31/2013 9:48:00 PM
Hey, that sounds a lot like me. Why wonder between what is real or dreamed? Opt for the better portion. Good luck in the contest with this gem, Richard. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/31/2013 10:00:00 PM
Thanks again Licia

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