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Sees In Shadowed Mind

Like a deep dark unseen shadow a big hill in front of thoughts rising sun's rays have no chance to play its role blocked all the ways there's no hole ghosts senses open their field silently to play all nonsense games with in speaks all the day bad words as honey cheers up for tears of one's pain no feeling for others' plight too in wake in dream mind is set up to ruin only among all social civilized human being no one even knows about it The only way is the way to God rubbing heart by chanting His name prayer brings a seed of faith manure respect helps to grow conscience fruits evolves in heart certainly blessing's twilight sees in shadowed mind For contest: sponsored by Gail Angel Doyle

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Date: 7/26/2013 11:18:00 PM
a nice entry for her contest, BL. You are an enlightened man.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/27/2013 8:57:00 AM
Thanks a lot, always, always, bl
Date: 7/26/2013 3:02:00 PM
One that speaks of your faith..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2013 8:57:00 AM
I feel happy with your nice comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/23/2013 9:43:00 PM
Hello BL., a praising poem.. tender images... xox~ Linda
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/24/2013 6:09:00 AM
Hi! friend, it was just felt and written from the practical experience got. Thanks for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl

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