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Seen At the Aquarium

fish eye to fish eye in love's stony embrace two rock fish kissing ________________________ Note: This haiku was created from my poem "Kissing Rocks." I'm finding it fun to write different forms for the same poem, with small word changes.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/23/2015 8:34:00 PM

aww that is a cool image ;-)

Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/23/2015 9:13:00 PM

So happy you enjoyed it!````Darlene

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/22/2015 8:17:00 AM

I really like your style, you're creative and innovative in your subject matter. Emile.

Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/22/2015 4:44:00 PM

Thank you, Emile, your gracious comments overwhelm me. ~~Darlene

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2015 4:50:00 AM

aww cute:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/22/2015 4:46:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, yes, what the aquarium offers is full of poem possibilities. Blessings, Darlene