Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Seem Not To Even Care

Sev Smith Avatar    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Seem Not To Even Care which was written by poet Sev Smith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Sev Smith

Best Sev Smith Poems

+ Fav Poet

Seem Not To Even Care

Its not like I asked for this
It’s something else besides
But knowing there is no way out
Just tears me up inside.
It’s like suffocation
Like drowning on dry land
Impossible, not really
On my knees for I cannot stand
You make promises and break them all
Crush them into dust
Moving on isn’t helping
To just leave things in the past
Burnt down to ashes, black and cold
Another day goes by
Another day in which I mean naught
Left on low, not on high
I do not beg for this torture
To be left out on my own
But you make it seem like that’s what I want
And again I’m left alone
One day you’ll pay the price for this
And regret it everyday
You deserved it for what you’ve done
And that’s all I have to say
You make is sound like it hurts you more
That you’re the victim here
Truth is you stand by and watch me cry
And seem not to even care

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 3/29/2012 8:22:00 AM
    wow I really liked this, its touching and almost everyone can say they have felt this at least once in their life.

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 4:39:00 AM
    I care Sev. Very well written,but sad poem Sev!Have a nice day. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Smith Avatar Sev Smith
    Date: 2/27/2012 7:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will thank you :) xxx