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Seeking

The last missile struck A once paradise now dies In suspended sleep ~~~~~~~~~~~ A pod leaves, seeking new life Refugees or asylum ¬

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/29/2010 9:04:00 AM
Jim, thought I would drop by my friend today, and see what his inspiration have to say ... well this one is profound, brevity uses mystery as a metaphor to unmask satiric genius. Well done, my friend
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:42:00 PM
Interesting write..I suppose that this pod is going to out of space...Thanks for your kind comments on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/24/2010 8:16:00 PM
sounds like sci fi with those pods mentioned!! These small forms are so fun to write in.
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Date: 9/24/2010 12:37:00 PM
interesting write... enjoyed today!
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