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Seeing What I Want To Human Folly

Like a warm breeze She can please me and tease my heart Yes, from the start Her strange art was two part told lies Pool like in size When she tries to those eyes can fool Than-bauk Contest

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/22/2016 11:49:00 PM

Very masterfully written poem, Richard. Stylistically exceptional love poem. I really adored this than-bauk write. Much love to you. RW

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2016 7:42:00 AM

Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Sarah.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 5:47:00 PM

Richard, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2016 12:08:00 AM

Thanks Linda. Hugs Rick.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:10:00 PM

I really liked your set, Richard. Congrats in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2016 7:22:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/11/2016 8:11:00 AM

Hi Richard, up to your usual high standard. I enjoyed the read Richard, following your words in thought. Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2016 7:23:00 PM

Thanks Vlad.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2016 11:13:00 AM

Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2016 7:23:00 PM

Thanks Funom.

Constance La France

Date: 2/29/2016 9:01:00 AM

Richard, this is a very difficult form, so limited but you did it perfect and beautifully, of course, I love it 7 ~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/29/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thanks Constance.

Red Fiery

Date: 2/26/2016 2:50:00 AM

Very powerful and well crafted work ! I will be back with more poems...I feel a bit inspired these days..:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2016 9:12:00 AM

Excellent, let me know when you post them.:0)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/25/2016 10:49:00 PM

Excellent results from a finicky form. Women are powerful in that they can be your greatest companion or cause you the greatest turmoil. You have no need to worry though ... you have a good eye, and see what's really there.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2016 11:53:00 PM

Thanks Timothy, I think I made an excellent choice.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2016 9:07:00 PM

OH Yes, you GOT this form to a tee. WeLL done. Loved that last image.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2016 11:54:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I struggled a bit with this one.