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Seeing Through the Innocent Eyes

The eyes of need, the eyes of a disciple, the eyes that sees perfection from a dad so human, the eyes of expectation, the eyes of loving tenderness, painting a heavy weighted makeup on a lighted loving face. Every of dad’s habit is a white clean handkerchief images of a hero seen as the family’s Hercules eyes so sticky, holding unto daddy’s head mental pictures, guiding the road of parental deeds overcoming a temptation when the sight of disappointment appears seeing a sorry one when diverging from responsibility’s route doing things right to maintain the happy countenance discipline and care putting both eyes to an intriguing debate. Tears of joy dilated by love and satisfaction a squeezing pair thrown at horrifying relationship or neglect eyes of different speeches, sight of telling languages causing various reactions with specific conspicuous rhythms pouring out life or to drown in society’s unfair mud nurturing its growing sight to snap each of experience’s posture just looking up and outwards because the inside still yearns through these eyes, I face up the beautiful challenge of being a daddy.

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Date: 6/3/2016 7:11:00 AM
Greetings Funom. Congrats for your placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/29/2016 4:35:00 PM
Wow! What an amazing insightful poem you have presented in this top winning poem Funom! This is so impressive! A wonderful father you must be! I loved your entry. Congratulations on your well deserved top placement. #7 ; )
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie Marcum
Date: 5/28/2016 7:17:00 PM
I am sure you will meet that challenge head on. Congratulations on your high win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Joyce
Date: 5/28/2016 2:37:00 PM
Funom, congratulations on your lovely win... Linda
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda. It's nice reading your comment on my page once again.
Date: 5/28/2016 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2016 10:17:00 AM
A beautiful poem about your father, Funom. Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2016 9:58:00 AM
"The eyes have it". Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/30/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you very much John Lawless
Date: 5/28/2016 9:31:00 AM
Love you memories of your dad, we tend to mirror the one we hero. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve Roper
Date: 5/28/2016 8:59:00 AM
Yes eyes are the life,the expression!congrats Funom!
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara
Date: 5/28/2016 8:52:00 AM
The eyes have it. Congratulations for being honored for such a wonderful effort Funom...
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Date: 5/30/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Charlie
Date: 5/22/2016 7:51:00 AM
Clever poetry Funom. yes the eyes are the windows of our soul.
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Date: 5/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry Horsman
Date: 5/20/2016 8:31:00 PM
I like how you focused on the eyes and the different ways of seeing with them. Nicely done for the contest, Funom
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea
Date: 5/20/2016 6:57:00 PM
SUPERB FREE VERSE MY FRIEND. Nothing I have ever done in my life surpasses my being a father ... A7
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Robert
Date: 5/20/2016 12:16:00 PM
Nothing in this world more honorable than a good Dad. Enjoyed this so much. Sorry my comments are sporadic....I am in the middle of relocating. best, SuZ
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Yes Suzanne, you are so so right. Thank you very much

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