Seeing the Light

Sunset sunshine rays Dispel cloud of blue feelings Emerging alive

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/29/2018 11:14:00 AM

Nicely composed. Sunset n Sunrise , both are exciting,even being daily events. Love.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/29/2018 11:11:00 AM

Well penned. Both sunset and sunrise are exciting to enjoy daily. Love.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/26/2018 7:05:00 AM

Wow!! We have had rain off and on now for several weeks so I know the feeling. Sorry so long in saying thank you for my placement in your contest but we have been doing things outside some, preparing for vacation, on vacation then trying to get over vacation. LOL. Thanks again for the placement. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/22/2018 4:08:00 AM

How true that is Nayda, it gives our bodies a charge of new life. It just makes you want to get up and do something. Here in the UK sunshine is a real bonus lol. Tom

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/22/2018 6:42:00 PM

Thank you for your feedback Tom.