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Seeing Red

In your dress I see and blush Laced deep color instant blood rush Dizzy with love and roses red Candle lit dinner we broke bread Glistening glasses deep red wine Rosy red lips very fine Cranberry cheesecake for dessert Many hours we did flirt Slowly closer we became To be one one of the same Where it goes who's to know Crimson red the evening flow 8/16/16

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Date: 7/28/2016 8:21:00 AM
A very good poem xx
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/28/2016 9:14:00 AM
Thanks for reading Wendy.
Date: 7/27/2016 6:49:00 AM
This is an intriguing and exciting romantic composition. You use shades of red with great effect, and the imagery is first-rate. Nice, Ron, very nice. Thanks for sharing it.
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/27/2016 6:55:00 AM
Thanks for the comments Paul.
Date: 7/27/2016 6:34:00 AM
Thank you for reading Jan.
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Date: 7/27/2016 6:08:00 AM
beautifully romantic Ronald using so many shades of red:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:03:00 AM
Hot Ronald, great write.
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/27/2016 5:38:00 AM
Thx Lewis, glad you stopped by.
Date: 7/26/2016 7:28:00 AM
This is very beautiful
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/26/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you for commenting.
Date: 7/26/2016 6:57:00 AM
Very clever romantic write Ronald using the color red!
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/26/2016 2:55:00 PM
Thanks for stopping in.
Date: 7/25/2016 6:52:00 PM
Nice romantic poem with a hint of passion, love the way you entwined the colour red throughout your poem in all its passionate shades.
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/25/2016 7:16:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to red... read.

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