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Seeing Red

If you keep spitting lines Gonna need a katana to cut through All of your dropping du bovines You wipe me off of your shoe While I measure you up For your funeral fashion debut Upon my fist you shall sup Come on read me the signs Can't keep breaking them in two Your lack berry whines Shall loose your teeth a few ------------- I was in a bad mood so I took a few minutes to spit this out. Enjoy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/18/2014 6:03:00 AM
A.E. I like this a lot, though I think rhyme is the wrong label it is more of a rap, being spat out fiercely ...well done...David
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 5/18/2014 6:32:00 AM
Ah thank you, didn't see it as an option in form, and I'm always experimenting with it. Much appreciated. :D

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