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Seeds of Discontent

Only the weeds of discontent will grow from harsh words planted in hate so speak not in anger

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/27/2024 7:09:00 AM

Dear Jerry, This carries a powerful message. The stark imagery of weeds growing from harsh words shows us of the destructive nature of anger. It's a call for mindful communication, choosing words that nurture kindness instead of discontent. Loved it! - Blessings Daniel

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:17:00 PM

Thank Daniel. I always enjoy your wonderful comments.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/27/2024 4:53:00 AM

sound advice and well written. Thanks...and PS thanks for reading and commenting on one of my short stories "Gone Fishin'." Grateful!! enjoy your day, Sara

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:16:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. I seems I seldom have enough time anymore to read peoples short stories. But they are often a great source of inspiration. I love the history you tell in yours.