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You were so tired You couldn’t wait to go lay down Mom was standing in the kitchen I was outside locking things up As you went through the back door You hollered, See you soon Moments later the air began to fill with Dread Getting thicker with each second of Mom's screams By the time I got to your side You laid unmoving, straight as board in your bed I could hardly bear seeing you that way As your Grandson dialed 911 My vision blurred and the world disappeared All I could see and hear were you Twenty three Chest compression's, Six breaths later You opened your eyes and looked into mine I could hardly bear seeing you so helpless As I held you in my arms Mom and others began to Pray I felt each word spoken go through me to you Flowing through your nephew's Hand that laid upon my shoulder I couldn’t help but to hold my breath And wrap myself around you even tighter than before I could hardly bear seeing you struggle No one had to tell us how bad you were To life-flight you to St. Jose’s was the only chance you had I tried to climbed in with you, but they wouldn’t let me I knew how terrified of heights you were As they closed those doors I hollered... See you there See you there Daddy, I’ll see you there There were lines and tubes and doctors everywhere I stayed up for day’s right beside you in a chair Mom sat across from me and held your hand The others circled around us in your room We could hardly bear seeing you that way Daddy Alyssa sang "Jesus Loves Me" for you in your little Church There must have been over a mile of cars parked Family and Friends coming to say Goodbye You'd think after almost 3 years it wouldn't make me cry It’s almost like you must’ve known The night you spoke those words to me That you’d be heading up to Heaven soon Not to take a nap When you closed that door and hollered... See you soon We'll meet again at those Pearly Gates, Daddy You have our word.. We'll see you there.. We'll see you there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/20/2016 2:25:00 AM
Such a moving write and a lovely tribute Sabrina - i lost my father last year. Hugs Jan xx
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 9/21/2016 11:23:00 PM
Thank you! I'm sorry for your loss!
Date: 8/14/2016 5:53:00 AM
Heartfelt tribute. Beautifully, lovingly penned. Great writing!
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 8/15/2016 11:22:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/16/2016 7:02:00 AM
Sabrina, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/15/2016 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations Sabrina, thank you for joining my contest. Skat
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/18/2016 1:35:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/13/2016 8:18:00 AM
That was a really heart-felt piece. Congrats Sabrina, for your placement in the contest...
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/13/2016 11:53:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/12/2016 7:05:00 PM
well I'm crying, this must have been so hard to write and you did it admirably, congrats on your win with this touching piece
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/13/2016 12:02:00 AM
Thank you! Yes, it was extremely hard to write. I have a hard time speaking aloud of what I remember. So I put it to paper.
Date: 6/12/2016 4:53:00 PM
this is SO very sad, Sabrina. I am happy for you this won a spot in the contest. It's very emotive work. One of the key words is "bear" (hope you will change to that spelling because this poem should be written as perfect as it sounds to the ear!) Congrats on your win.
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/12/2016 11:51:00 PM
Thank you! I changed it. Sometimes I don't realize my grammar until someone points it out. Thank you for that.
Date: 6/12/2016 11:12:00 AM
Lovely write! A comfort to you, those last words.
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 6/12/2016 11:48:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/30/2016 5:30:00 PM
Sad write, Sabrina. A moving write... Hope to see you post again. LINDA
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 4/1/2016 12:39:00 AM
Thanks Linda! ~Hugs~
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 4/1/2016 12:34:00 AM
Thanks Linda! ~Hugs~
Date: 3/10/2016 3:02:00 AM
So emotional..
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Sabrina Niday Hansel
Date: 3/11/2016 12:43:00 AM
Thank you! This one was difficult for me to write. It's mostly all I remember during those 12 days.

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