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I had never before glimpsed the sea, and I had often felt the lack, As rainbows sense the lack of luster, so they keep on coming back. I dwelled in a pastoral area, quite far from any big body of water, As the stars keep to their positions, in a strict adherence to order. I had for long years been a librarian, for I had always loved books. As admirers of sumptuous flowers, are giving them second looks! Though my job was uniquely rewarding, it held no true adventure, And although I really loved my life, all must have one to treasure. Seas have great power and beauty, forever rocked by cold waves, For the gentle forces of nature, often turns movement into slaves! Most of my friends were travelers, and had seen a lot of the world, As owls appear just in time to see, moonlight with colors swirled. Their many tales had intrigued me, making me yearn to live more, Like the golden rays of the sunshine, always lead one out the door. The days were filled with color, and nighttime stars were gleaming, When I decided I would take a trip, as I couldn't stop my dreaming. And my exotic beach vacation, was now imminent though delayed, As autumn is always imminent, in the fields where summer played. I planned to fly to the lovely island, so that I would reach it sooner, As nighttime grows quite still, just to hear from starlight crooners. Very soon I was on a plane, looking down on marshmallow clouds, As the sun oversees colored mists, draping the earth in its shrouds. After rest and unpacking, it was eventide when I got to the beach, It was so gigantic and lovely, as I listened to the seagulls screech. I sat there gazing at the beautiful sea, in the failing evening light, Thrilled at a secret dream come true, as lovers thrill to starlight! It seems that I very briefly dozed, as I rapidly awoke with a start, As the one who's falling awakens, to find another took their heart! I was amazed to see a large sailboat, where none had lately been; And a lady on deck beckoned to me, as spring beckons summer in. Intrigued, I swam over, and climbed the rope ladder she let down; Still, when I had finally climbed aboard, I did not see her around. Yet that was the least of my worries, for that boat had sped away, So I went to press the lady, but she had vanished like last Tuesday! By this time the boat had gone, much too far for me to swim back, I was alone with stars and moon, but felt peace in the inky black. The ship was amply stocked, so I had supper before retiring to bed. Where waves rocked me into sleep, and dreams entered my head. Dawn's sunshine found me refreshed and avid for more adventure, For I knew the ship was magic, and the lady was doldrums' avenger! Thus began my long amazing odyssey, as I sailed around the world, From the shores where I'd started, to where sunset horizon curled. The sailboat somehow sailed itself, so that I needed no special skills, As yodelers require no special skills, to go warbling through the hills. I disembarked on countless shores, and mingled with many cultures, And I saw enough to last lifetimes, of the ordinary and true wonders! When I alighted for a last time, my ship vanished as it had appeared, So I returned to a dull beloved job, under a dawn sky, color smeared!

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Date: 12/19/2021 8:19:00 AM
Truly awesome poetry, Evelyn, I'm making this one a favorite. You have an amazing gift. The imagery is so pure and the way you contrast with another example or a metaphore or similie is fulfilling to the reader. I so enjoy your poetry, I'll follow you my poetess friend, Bill
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/19/2021 10:18:00 AM
I extend my heartfelt thanks for your kind compliments, Bill. I am truly happy that you enjoy my poetry, and I am deeply honored to have you as a follower. Merry Christmas, my friend, Evelyn
Date: 12/18/2021 9:56:00 AM
Your fantasy is fantastic. Great imagery. I am surrounded by the sea. Not much pleasant in winter, but during the hot days. It is wonderful and sailboats abound. Merry Christmas.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/18/2021 12:19:00 PM
It seems that you live in lovely surroundings. Thank you for your kind observations. Have a great day. :)
Date: 12/18/2021 9:25:00 AM
Can I say WOW! You, Evelyn, are quite an amazing storyteller. You coast off from the library headed for adventure. Love the mention of seasons and metaphors. This line blew me away: For the gentle forces of nature, often turns movement into slaves! This poem is a fave!!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/18/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, for the honor of your lovely remarks, and also the fave. Your pleasure in this poem is my delight. :)
Date: 12/18/2021 8:13:00 AM
I sat there gazing at the beautiful sea, in the failing evening light, Thrilled at a secret dream come true, as lovers thrill to starlight! Evelyn, this is a beautifully composed couplet; your analogies are exquisite, and your word choice is excellent.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/18/2021 12:29:00 PM
Many thanks for your joyful and inspirational words, Lasaad. A blessed Christmas to you and yours.

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