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See No Evil Contest Sponsor: Silent One I watch them before the crepuscular at dawn and after penumbra at dusk, I go from exuberant to halcyon bleeding inside needing to adjust. I'm so cynical about evil beings up there, where the stars align, Sometimes they fly so desultory, scary, detached yet intertwined. Is there really such a thing as the dark zodiac in regards to astrology? An evil vision representing my sign, is there even an analogy? I've been terrified before watching the Aries in me become visceral, the wrath inside me would be opulent if they are real and become literal. If these jealous creatures exist and try to take over the planet earth, A deep sonorous shock would shake the world preparing for rebirth. Second Place Winner Date Written: January 26, 2016

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Date: 6/7/2017 4:07:00 AM
Great poems. And words to look up in the dictionary. This is inspiring...
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Date: 2/3/2016 12:28:00 PM
really good, lou.... cheers to you for a greeat win.. huggs
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Date: 2/2/2016 7:48:00 AM
Laura, love your interpretation. Nice couplets.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/2/2016 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Jamesd *smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/2/2016 1:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent poem!
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/2/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Susan :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/1/2016 11:29:00 PM
Laura, Many Congratulations on your win
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/2/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Sathya :) *smiles*-luloo
Date: 2/1/2016 6:55:00 PM
Beatifully done! Congrats on your well deserved win, Laura!
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/1/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Balveen :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/1/2016 5:50:00 PM
Such an amazing theme you chose to use these difficult words, Lauro! Loved it! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/1/2016 7:06:00 PM
Sandra, thank you very much:) *smiles*-luloo
Date: 2/1/2016 5:22:00 PM
I'm expecting a space ship to swoop down and pick up those 3 people..lol Congrats to you for word usage and your imagination.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/1/2016 5:43:00 PM
Thank you Lin *smiles -luloo
Date: 1/26/2016 10:57:00 PM
Nice write, best of luck in the contest!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/27/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Edward :) *smiles*
Date: 1/26/2016 8:21:00 PM
Excellent use of the required words in your poem, Laura. This should do well in the contest:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/26/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thank you Laura :) *Smiles*

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