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Seducing Beauty

I want to know The limits of your passion So I wade into your sea Reaching to the depths of you Losing myself within your blissful currents I Penetrate the force of your nature Slowly I ascend To the surface of your wonder Riding each passionate wave Until I feel your release The calming of you The beauty of your stillness My hands stretch to your horizon Marveling at the magnificence of you You let them dance upon your softness As I rise towards your sky The winds of your changing Caressing my being You bathe me in a soft light Gravity pulls me towards your moon The stars adorn the blackness of your hair Within your twinkles I am mesmerized Confounded and elated by your orbit Flung to the reaches of your constellations You are the the beginning and end of me The resonance of all my notes The answer to my need My inner sanctum The softness of my cravings The realization of my wonder The space within my understanding The hope I breath The suffocation of my fear For with you I have come to know What it means To experience Limitless Passion

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Len Gasun

Date: 11/2/2014 8:58:00 AM

Wow! A very wonderful romantic write my dear friend! I enjoyed so much the read. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/27/2014 6:52:00 AM

I read it again....I enjoyed it more this time around. It's just simply magnificent, Richard. She is a lucky blessed and fortunate woman.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2014 8:38:00 AM

Fortunate for me she thinks so, when in fact I feel like the blessed and fortunate one. Thanks for rereading it.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/14/2014 9:44:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your win. This poem is exceedingly passionate. I enjoyed it immensely... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2014 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Verlena.

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/14/2014 3:11:00 PM

I see congrats are in order on a winning write and I can easily see why !! Beautifully intriguing poetry !!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:40:00 PM

Thanks sweet lady.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2014 12:33:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:41:00 PM

Thanks and a big hug back to you Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2014 12:20:00 PM

- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Richard ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:43:00 PM

Thanks, I am fortunate you have left me many kind words.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/14/2014 11:26:00 AM

ohh, you entice me, rich.. big cheers on your fine win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:44:00 PM

Thanks Nette! Hugs Rick.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/14/2014 9:37:00 AM

...loved it the first time love it still. Congratulations on being chosen fourth overall. Well deserved.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:45:00 PM

Thanks for coming back.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/14/2014 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations! This is a beautifully penned romance of the heart and mind.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:46:00 PM

Hi Monterey, I am a bit behind on my response. Thanks so much for your visits today.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/14/2014 8:26:00 AM

Super,congrats Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:47:00 PM

Thanks Kayode.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/14/2014 7:32:00 AM

Wow a wonderful write Richard! Purely passionate n perfectly romantic! Congrats on huge win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:48:00 PM

Thanks Upma, I appreciate your kind visit.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 4:54:00 AM

Excellent romantic free verse; like how you 'explore' the sea, metaphorically speaking. Very much inspired. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:50:00 PM

;0) thanks Paul!

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/11/2014 11:06:00 PM

One of the best free verse writes I have read here. Good luck in the contest this should place very well my friend. A super 7 in my book..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2014 7:51:00 PM

Wow, the award for favorite comment goes to you Robert. Thanks!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2014 10:43:00 AM

Dear Richard, the sea is a magnificent venue to explore in a passionate way and you stayed true to your theme throughout the entire write. My most romantic weekends were spent in my boat at sea. Wish I'd had someone like you with whom to share it. Sending a Soup Mail, my friend. Love and blessings for a great weekend, Carolyn

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/11/2014 11:07:00 AM

You are sweet Carolyn, he would be a fortunate man to share the experience with you. Thanks for the blessing, I hope you have a great weekend as well.

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 10/11/2014 10:17:00 AM

You have written an imaginatively and powerfully compelling poem, Richard. Wishing you all the best. Good luck!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/11/2014 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Ndaba

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/9/2014 8:19:00 PM

This poem finely illustrates masculine sensitivity, a unique quality of enamoured exploration Richard. The way you incorporate the natural elements into the fusion of your ability and her force's desire is very romantic. "I penetrate the force of your nature..." awesome physical and spiritual meaning! "Limitless passion" requires serious emotional endurance. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/9/2014 11:47:00 PM

Hi Justin, your response illistrates your own deep understanding of a womans limitless passion. The right man can fully realize her possibilities and in the process experience a glimpse of eternity.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/9/2014 6:52:00 PM

Love this seductive write Richard. Using beautiful metaphors and similes keeping a measure of dignity. Love the way it should be.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/9/2014 11:52:00 PM

Thanks Maurice.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/9/2014 3:54:00 PM

Lovely in every way, Richard. Good luck in the contest. I won't be joining....The seductress in me is awfully quiet....I hope you go far with this. Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/10/2014 12:00:00 AM

I don't know, Richard. Read the poem I'm about to post. Perhaps that will say something. I love your response to my post, Richard. I do...You first named me the Queen of the Romantic pen...what will I do if that pen runs dry? Thanks for the encouragement.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/9/2014 11:51:00 PM

Eileen, you must enter Justin's contest. You are the mistress of the passionate, the Queen of the romantic pen. This is your realm! I will be so sad if you do not enter. Pleaaaseee enter.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/9/2014 2:34:00 PM

Much enjoyed the addition, now for another shower.... :) hugs baby this is nice :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/9/2014 11:54:00 PM

You make me smile! Thanks for coming back. I feel bad for causing a water shortage in your city, *lol*.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2014 11:47:00 AM

- Richard, a romantic and beautifully written poem - Love it ..... really !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/9/2014 11:55:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2014 9:44:00 AM

passionate, seductive ... simply sensational Richard - good luck in the contest this should do very well for you! Hugs janxxx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/11/2014 11:15:00 AM

Thanks and hugs back to you.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/9/2014 9:42:00 AM

Awesome Richard...love how you used nature and all it's beauty as seduction...very clever...this will be sitting on top the podium...cheers my friend

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/11/2014 11:16:00 AM

Cheers and thanks back to you.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/9/2014 9:12:00 AM

Wow, keep going baby you are taking me to the moon, okay i'm gonna go take a cold shower and wonder what comes next :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/11/2014 11:23:00 AM

Warm water properly placed would be a lot better than a cold shower. *lol*

J. R. Corbin

Date: 10/9/2014 9:08:00 AM

Well, if it's not done, you are surely off to a great start! Powerful stuff, Richard. High passion. very nice. Jim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/11/2014 11:25:00 AM

Thanks J.R. it is now completed.