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When you are near me, I’m magnetized by your sphere. As tides drawn to wooing moon, I cannot just be motionless when you appear. Sadly, you fade away soon. January, 4, 2015 Contest: Modern Sedoka Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2016 8:03:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one again, hugs Rick.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2016 1:15:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Dan Cwiak

Date: 1/20/2016 3:30:00 PM

Very well deserved with this winner, Eileen. Congrats on your win.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/19/2016 7:25:00 PM

See, I'm not too kind, first place! Laura love obviously agrees with me. Cong atulations on your top spot.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2016 3:51:00 PM

responding to what you said to me below. I did not ruin your chances at all. GREAT win, my friend!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/18/2016 4:12:00 PM

How did I miss this excellent sedoka, Eileen!! Sad...beautiful...and a deserved first place in the contest! Love the accompanying visual, too:) Congratulations!!! Hugs // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 1/18/2016 9:57:00 AM

Eileen, when I first read this I knew it would be a winner. Wonderful, thank you for being a part of my contest! *smiles* -luloo

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/9/2016 9:56:00 AM

Oh, I like and relate ... CayCay

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/6/2016 11:36:00 AM

You bind this situation of longing and the moon & tide so wonderfully, Eileen! I really liked this! I pray that you have a 2016 that is filled with more love, joy and hope... sending hugs to you!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/5/2016 3:05:00 AM

Eileen, imagery wise two thumbs up, the message quite sad! Belated HAppy New Year! I passed your message to James and he said it was nice of you, thanks in behalf of him, smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2016 3:09:00 AM

Thanks, Olive....so good to have you visit. I wish you the best in 2016. I so appreciate the visit...hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/5/2016 2:07:00 AM

Wow Eileen subtle emotion so well penned.. best wishes for contest.. May u n ur dears hv a scintillating year 2016 !!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/4/2016 7:37:00 PM

oh, this one sounds like a winner to me, eileen! lovely!

White Sage

Date: 1/4/2016 4:38:00 PM

beautiful write Eileen...

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/4/2016 3:50:00 PM

Very nice! :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/4/2016 3:41:00 PM

Beautiful piece, enjoyed the read..............A.M.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2016 3:31:00 PM

You are very good at these shorter forms! Is there anything you can't do well??

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 3:34:00 PM

Thanks, dear. You are way too kind in your appraisal. Bless you for it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2016 3:03:00 PM

this is wonderful, Eileen. This is the type of contest I really enjoy trying and I hope to get around to it soon. Looks to me like you mastered the challenge! (you did not post the shardoma(?) yet, right?)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 3:35:00 PM

Thanks...dear. Well...if you're joining...there goes any chance of winning for me....HA HA. Yes...I've posted it. Hugs.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2016 2:06:00 PM

mysteriously alluring, eileen.. one of your best!.. huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 2:09:00 PM

Thank you, Nette. I appreciate the visit and the comment. :) I have the flu and on medication...Been feeling grumpy and miserable, so...these comments bring me joy. Hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/4/2016 2:05:00 PM

Sad yet so beautiful , Sad verses are always the deepest in my opinion. Excellent.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 2:09:00 PM

Yes, dear....I am with you. There is something about sad that is hauntingly dear. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2016 1:47:00 PM

Beautiful but so sad Eileen good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 2:07:00 PM

Oh...not MINE...this is a new COLLAB. Part of me...with addition from Richard. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2016 2:01:00 PM

I read it yesterday lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 1:59:00 PM

Hey, sweetie pie....Sad and sappy...What can I say! That's me...OH...but I have a limerick up with Richard. Give it a read, Miss Queen of humor. Love ya.