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I found all her tears in the pools of her sorrow and felt the depths of her grief The time will draw near when a brighter tomorrow brings her a joyous relief ---- 1/3/2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:12:00 PM

joseph, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2016 4:03:00 PM

I love how this is short and to the point. MY kind of poem. Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2016 11:54:00 AM

Beautifully written; hopefully tears of sadness will become tears of joy. ~ Congratulations on a deserved high placing, Joseph. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/19/2016 8:08:00 AM

Well done, Joseph. Sad with a message of hope for the future. Congrats on your fine win. Sandra

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/19/2016 6:52:00 AM

The last two lines made me feel relieved for the girl/lady/woman. Congrats, Joseph, on your top placement in the contest! ;-)

David Fisher

Date: 1/18/2016 8:37:00 PM

This Sedoka is excellent and deserving a good placement.

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 10:44:00 AM

JOSEPH, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

Lu Loo

Date: 1/18/2016 10:22:00 AM

Joseph, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest *smiles* -luloo

Joseph May
Date: 1/18/2016 10:59:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Laura...hugs

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/9/2016 10:25:00 AM

I like your write very much ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2016 7:28:00 PM

oh this is just wonderful and a prime example of less is better. I did two different stanzas, not posted yet, and I hope they measure up to this one splendid one.