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__________________________ only kept alive by thirsty eyes and souls which yearn poetic justice lay in wait along the roadside arriving in silence small facets twine a grand expression, if only to see- as I gaze bewildered each imprint follow, of flickering light in fragmented dream if by chance I reach inward, out and beyond pushing this mortal flesh away could it be in that moment a thousand souls cry for sight untouched in purity roam... ___________________________ A Brian Strand Contest..

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Date: 6/20/2011 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/18/2011 9:53:00 AM
… goody cheers for the high win, rick! :) huggs!
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Date: 6/18/2011 9:30:00 AM
congrats on your first place win.well written
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Date: 6/18/2011 5:30:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your super big win in the contest with this rare beauty write my friend.. oh so awesome as u luv..vg
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:25:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today ^Rick. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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