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Secrets of Sundown

The night a blazing orange. A sense of freedom and adventure cuts through the air- Nothing can stop us now! The sun sets to leave only a tinge of amber, As the day creatures turn to their beds except for us- The night creatures, For whom has sprung to life. We run wild across the land, While the tangelo skies soar above us. Have you ever felt blood orange? Inspiration blossoms from within as the heart pulses, To throw open a window. To exscape reality. Your steps are light and ethereal. The high of the night that will never end.

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Date: 5/6/2024 12:14:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/12/2016 10:36:00 PM
MICHELLE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/10/2015 5:00:00 PM
Michelle, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/10/2015 12:13:00 PM
Michelle, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2015 10:39:00 PM
excellent michelle
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