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The light's illuminating secrets of ancient stars Through veil of existence of those prismatic tapestries Obeys your whispered command and paints the cosmos You, the conjurer, weaver of constellations. Bend the fabric of time, at crossroads of reality Twisting fate, will you While moon’s auroras of emerald veils cosmic symphony of song Will you summon dawn’s blush or veil the world in twilight, While light’s whispered decree about alchemy of existence dances, There still miracles bloom and stars bow. So, command, enchantress of photons make the universe bend to your will. using something Suzette Richards put on her blog to write a work.

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/20/2024 4:00:00 PM

Very unique...I never quite thought of the universe as bending to our will, weaving constellations. Beautiful.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2024 4:44:00 PM

Paige, No, the universe doesn't bend to our will. Only the Creator has that ability. Thanks for reading this one. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/18/2024 8:04:00 PM

Profound penning here, Sara. Cosmic implications and incantations from the 'ultimate dream-weaver.' Kudos, Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/19/2024 6:46:00 AM

Gershon, thanks for the kudos. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/18/2024 9:25:00 AM

A special read that gives hope to mankind.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2024 11:24:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara K

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 9:46:00 AM

What a wonderful and unique with such spontaneous blissful touch of similies. A blessed read undeed

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/17/2024 12:49:00 PM

I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work, Silpika. Your time spent here is appreciated. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 3/17/2024 7:24:00 AM

This mesmerizing poem draws readers into a mystical realm where the universe is shaped and guided by the whims of an enigmatic figure - the conjurer, the weaver of constellations, the enchantress of photons. Through rich imagery and evocative language, the poet explores the power and majesty of creation, portraying the interplay between light, time, and cosmic forces.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/17/2024 12:48:00 PM

Why, thank you, SO. I appreciate the visit and high praise. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/16/2024 6:33:00 PM

Dear Sara, What a mesmerizing journey through the cosmos, where the interplay of light and secrets unveils the mysteries of existence. I love how your poem captivates with its lyrical prose, inviting us to ponder the profound forces that shape our reality. As the conjurer of constellations, you skillfully navigate the cosmic universe, bending time and twisting fate with your whispered commands. Your poetic prowess illuminates the wonders of the universe, leaving us in awe of its beauty and complexity. Sara, this is such an enchanting poem. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/17/2024 4:23:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel. You realize that I only somewhat woven what Suzette put on her blog together to try to make some sense of it. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/16/2024 4:40:00 PM

Magnificent write, Sara K. Such creativity in your lines. I do appreciate your poetic voice. This poem was alive with unique imagery (prismatic tapestries). I loved this line: here still miracles bloom and stars bow. Am faving this one...have a pleasant evening, hugs. Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/16/2024 4:45:00 PM

I am honored you would fav it, Sara B. You need to read Suzette's blog before you give me too much credit. Sara K

Bill Baker

Date: 3/16/2024 3:40:00 PM

Cosmic words in your favorite poetic form, Sara. I'm impressed with your creativity and imagery in this one. Have a joyful weekend, my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/16/2024 4:41:00 PM

Thank you, Bill..Those are Suzette Richard's words rearranged in a new poem. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K