Secrets

secrets awakened by an autumn breeze their lullaby once a safe haven rise up as whispers in the trees drifting hither and yonder morphing as amber leaves falling to the ground renewing cause secrets heard loud and clear

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Tom Woody

Date: 4/27/2024 6:05:00 AM

Quite cryptic trying to decipher the connection between falling leaves and revealed secrets. This one is deep and worthy of contemplation Franci

Franci Hoffman
Date: 4/27/2024 6:12:00 AM

Thank you for your very kind comment, Tom.

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 6:57:00 AM

Wonderful etheree with the lilting flow on the universal ever appealing subject. You shaped and presented it the way it is with the inquisitive essence of the secret. Regards

Franci Hoffman
Date: 3/19/2024 2:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Silpika. I am delighted you enjoyed it.

Paul Bell

Date: 3/2/2024 2:06:00 AM

I wonder how many people have found out secrets that shattered their lives. Can secrets be kept, and how much of a strain is put upon one who keeps the secret.

Franci Hoffman
Date: 3/2/2024 7:28:00 AM

Paul, perhaps something we will never know. I've kept secrets for years out of respect. However, if keeping a secret involves a life threatening situation, I would rethink my position. Thank you for your comment.