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Gently now, my sweet tell me the secrets you keep. What fashions the mystery you are? Whisper it, Love, with mind ajar. Whence cometh your charm abundant? I praise it such I’m often redundant. What put goodness in every pore? I partake of it, wanting ever more. What gives rise to your alluring smile? It’s a model’s asset, part of your style. And those eyes—how do they kindle desire? Two of you, two more that ignite my fire. Where did you find hair that’s a treasure? Languishing in it is an unsurpassed pleasure. Yes, tell me darling so when I awake deeper the love we will gently make.

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Date: 5/8/2020 10:09:00 PM
Dear Paul, this is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Soft, sweet and romantic. Simply breathtaking. Your heart is filled with so much love. :) Brandy
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/14/2020 10:02:00 PM
Words from you never fail to be golden. I cherish them. Thank you, Brandy. Hugs & Love, Paul
Date: 5/4/2020 12:05:00 AM
Hello Paul … to be smitten shows the world is a beautiful place surrounding you and your loved one - thanks once again Paul - Lindsay
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/5/2020 10:26:00 PM
What a lovely, sweet comment. Thank you, Lindsay. I cherish it but not as much as I cherish your story poems. They are in a class of their own. Hugs, Paul
Date: 4/17/2020 8:30:00 AM
This reminds me of the songs of Solomon. It is truly lovely.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/5/2020 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. Your comment means a lot to me coming as it does from a superb poet. All good wishes, Paul
Date: 4/11/2020 1:25:00 PM
aww how tender and romantic Paul:-) a beautiful feel good poem, thanks so much for sharing:-) Happy Easter, hope you and your loved ones are well:-) hugs jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/5/2020 10:37:00 PM
I thought I had sent this, Jan. I just want you to know how much I value and appreciate your kind, sweet words. They mean a lot to me. Hugs, Paul

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