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Secret Woman

The reflection in your eyes Hide the sad lines of beauty Mirrored in your own little ocean Touched a thousand secrets Who sees behind the smile Enigmatic soul gone before me So calm, but never passive Touched a thousand secrets The reflection in your eyes Drown the life before me So clear, tranquil, almost pitying Touched a thousand secrets Goodbye my distant lady The night has seen you gone No glance to say, no feelings Touched a thousand secrets The reflection in your eyes Crept inside my soul Mysterious lady, thoughts so deep Tried to touch your mind The reflection in your eyes Like the ocean taking me further away Beautiful enigmatic lady Touched a thousand secrets.

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Date: 4/17/2023 9:11:00 AM
A mystery woman, how intriguing. I like the repeating lines, almost a sonnet, Paul.
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/18/2023 8:22:00 AM
Still a mystery.
Date: 4/5/2023 8:17:00 AM
Our styles are definitely similar. I enjoyed the repetition of lines and air of implications.
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/5/2023 9:05:00 AM
Stealing your lines, Hannah.
Date: 4/5/2023 7:35:00 AM
Beautiful with that air of mystery Paul….very nice! Debx
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/5/2023 9:11:00 AM
Mystery is always good.

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