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Secret Rendezvous

starlit sky, two melt into one, enchanted secret rendezvous...

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Tobey Hill

Date: 10/20/2010 10:40:00 AM

lovely, lovely write...TAH

Steven Mossburg

Date: 10/20/2010 8:58:00 AM

Well done. You say enough without saying too much. You let the imagination create the pictures.

Gordon Hickman

Date: 10/20/2010 4:04:00 AM

Shadowy forms becoming entwined in a secret tryst! Very well written Wilma, and thanks very much for your visit and remarks hicky.

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/19/2010 5:50:00 PM

Perfect romantic vision, for two romantic lovers, Wilma!!! Enjoyed tonight! Thanks as always for your comments, my friend! Love, audry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2010 7:19:00 PM

oooh, romantic, Wilma!! LUv, Andrea

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/18/2010 4:40:00 PM

just not in the mood. jhl

Daver Austin

Date: 10/18/2010 3:13:00 PM

This is both hot and tender, depending on one's thinking. I like it. Dave

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/18/2010 2:20:00 PM

Very sweet and romantic!!!! warm and fuzzy all over from this one... Love Michael...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/18/2010 1:50:00 PM

More...more! I want to hear more about this clandestine romance! Don't leave us hanging, Wilma. Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/18/2010 1:48:00 PM

So romantic! Great senryu, Wilma! Take care, Diane

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 10/18/2010 12:02:00 PM

niiice! a beautiful poem!

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/18/2010 11:09:00 AM

ooh la la ! sounds very seductive Wilma! take care~Deb

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2010 10:44:00 AM

Nice images to bring out an image of secret rendezous

John Rhinem

Date: 10/18/2010 10:37:00 AM

Smile ~ "Lovely Thought Wrapped Amid Pretty Possibilities of, 'A Heaven Sent Moment' Between Two Loving Souls; 'The Rendezvous' Brushed In Vibrant Hues; 'Beautiful!!!'" ~ Hope "Your Treasures" are doing well my dear &, good to see "Your Splendours" again ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'Dear, Lovely & Precious Wilma Neels;'" Bye!:) ~

James Fraser

Date: 10/18/2010 9:02:00 AM

Dreamy, swoon - someone fan me. Lovely Senyru Wilma >> James ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/18/2010 8:56:00 AM

Well u have my vote on these lines dear Wilma my friend.. who can pass on a starlit sky .. allowing two to melt.. into one.. enchanted.. awesome read today and luv those passionate pieces to begin.. let me share with Ron while he is driving.. we may have to stop luv..thankxxx..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/18/2010 8:33:00 AM

hmm i wonder would this be about you and a mr. somebody?? ;) winkity wink ;) btw check back on your title pls...I think a letter z is trying to join that rendezvous of yours...hugs nikko :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/18/2010 7:41:00 AM

lovely senryu Wilma, love it